Reviewing Authority
"Captain Davis oversees the patrol division. He reduced response times last quarter. He is a good leader who listens to his sergeants. He handles internal investigations fairly. He is professional and knows the policy manual well." sample pen picture of officers better
"It’s technically true," said Marcus, the junior copywriter. "What’s missing?" He handles internal investigations fairly
| Parameter | Officer A | Officer B | |-----------|-----------|-----------| | | Transformational | Laissez-faire | | Integrity | Proactive & transparent | Rule-bound but passive | | Crisis Management | Excellent | Poor | | Team Morale | High | Low (complaints received) | | Promotion Readiness | Immediate | Not ready | Ensure your "better" picture avoids them
Even with samples, raters fall into these three traps. Ensure your "better" picture avoids them.
: Note extraordinary achievements or how they act as an "asset" to the team. Writing Tips PEN PICTURE Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
: Summarize their role and specific area of expertise relevant to the current project or department.