| Pitfall | Fix | |---------|-----| | Melodrama (every scene is a screaming match) | Insert quiet scenes of tenderness or humor. Contrast makes drama land harder. | | Explaining the dysfunction in dialogue | Show it through action. A father who never asks questions is more powerful than one who says “I don’t care.” | | Making one character the “source” of all problems | Dysfunction is a system. Even the “villain” was made, not born. | | Resolving everything in the final act | Some wounds don’t heal. Leave a splinter. | | Forgetting the outside world | Family drama is richer when work, politics, or friends intrude. |
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